All Comments on 'Community Braai'

750 words doesn't do the story justice. Maybe include a report back when Mandla collected the relish, and drove his dick into her virgin anus.

An Afrikaans person must have written this. Ive never heard another language use a word so unique as an old fashioned boere braai 😁🤣

Wayne is an English name, a Johan or Hercus or Jaco would have done justice. Good story though

Compact, hot action. I'd love to read the full story, including the part where he returned for the relish.

I had a similar experience. We were caravaning and I noticed this young athletic black man, sharing their caravan with his parents.

I worked up a fantasy of him banging me, never expecting it to happen. Then my parents sent me to the shared scullery to clean up after supper. Karabo saw my heavy load and offered to help. He had me in the scullery...

750 words are not enough to do the story justice, but full of action none-the-less.

Nice introduction to 'Amanda's seconds'.

Thank you for sharing your personal experience Anonymous.

CockTsotsi, I'm torn between limiting my Mandla works to 750, and expanding them. I currently favoring the 750 word option.

Stag of Mzansi - I'm glad that you've read and enjoyed both stories. I didn't plan to do it, but was thinking of a third interaction between the two.