by kevinlaroche
See more of this he's not being cuckolded and she shows her love by being overly aggressive this is a good one keep it up
Someone said that a Wattpad author called ‘kiteplayer’ copied and pasted my work ; I am kiteplayer and kevinlaroche is the other of my two pseudonyms, under which I’ve published my work.
I love the involvement of Melissa’s mother. The discussion between them was actually very interesting. Part of me was thinking that maybe Melissa’s mom could help seduce Jared too.
This story I actually rather liked. Her affection felt real, didn't care for her calling him a slave at the end, but that aside this story was good! Thanks for writing it :3
Interesting premise.
Stupid story.
Poorly written.
Lacking eroticism.
She doesn't kiss him. No making out? No baring her breasts? No making him kiss them. Lick them. Suck them?
Just BOOM, cock in pussy.
And why did it have to be 4" long? That added nothing. And was she really going to be happy with a 4-incher for the rest of her life?
You also need to learn what PERUSE means.
One star.