All Comments on 'Confessions of a Slave Girl Pt. 01'

Good intro. Look forward to the next steps

Please, do not make this slut wait too long for the next part!

Thanks for your writing.

Great start and the story seem to be able to go in lot of different directions, it will be interessting to see the one pick.

A small piece of constructive critisism; to me it seems like a small disconnect, between the fact that she is so innocent and naive, but still she goes for the more hardcore purchases right away - like a leather hood. But it is a very minor thing.

Nice slow beginning will look forward to next chapter,

The second part has already been submitted, but while you wait I have 8 parts of another series going and the first part of a third series posted

Nice slow start will be awaiting ch 2

The first part of this story is well written. I am interested where it will go.

A nice start, looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Should have carried on to see what happened