All Comments on 'Congregation - You Are Mine Ch. 02'

Nice and dark. How far does "Tori" have to go to get free.

Your story is interesting, however, can you please in your next chapter perhaps provide some background on Tori?

How he kidnapped her, her age, why he chose her to be his wife

description of Tori, her previous life. I am a little lost about your character Tori.

Thank you for writing.

I get that she's scared. I don't know a single girl who wouldn't be, and that's the problem. She's scared, and that's it. What about her makes her different from any other girl? Why are we following her story and not another girls story who ended up in this situation? Is she the most interwsting kidnap victim you can muster? You've got to give Tori a personality if you expect to make her multi-chapter story worth coming back to.

Good story when's the next part?

Why so cruel? Non consent are my favorite stories, but not when they are needlessly mean and cruel, which this series is seeming to be.