by DarkTwistedDesires
I’m a 20 year old female and I dream of these things happening to me. I want to be fucked hard and relentlessly without mercy. I want to be made to feel like a disgusting slut. Thank you for writing this story and helping me realize that. I probably came 3 to 4 times while reading this story and it helped me see who I really am on the inside.
Needs more story developments. I love the sex scenes and I don’t want you to reduce them but I wish there was more added to the storyline in each chapter. It is just a little slow paced. There’s too much of Toris thoughts and it’s a bit repetitive. Hopefully you reveal more as you release more chapters. It’s still one of my top favorite stories!
Will you be submitting a next chapter and will you finish the series?
PLEASE?
This is a great storyline. When he impregnates her, you should continue to have him fuck her all the way until the baby is born. Sexier yet, make her nurse him as the hormones work and her milk comes in.
Extremely hot! The brutal force, the crying, and the complete obsession with impregnation all make the story perfectly erotic. And each chapter does not disappoint with the number of rape scenes. I understand that for a long storyline, there needs to be some realistic parts, like the victim’s anger toward her abuser. I love the terror, helplessness and desperation much more, though. PLEASE continue the story!!!
Not sure how far you plan to go, but I have had fantasies where the entire course of pregnancy is eroticized, including colostrum production, stretching the orifices in preparation for childbirth, waiting so many days following birth before resuming intercourse, etc. Because I love a happy ending, I hope that there is someway to keep her resentment from spilling over to the kids. No matter how far you go, I will want to read it!
Not too shabby so far. If you really wanted to sell it, you should have actually had her contemplate several actual plans to kill him and get away and why they wouldn't work. You should have her contemplate killing him and committing suicide. Victory is only truly worth seizing when your opponent has fought with all their might. That, or she wins and gets away, but seeing as the whole town has been operating like this for a while, she'll probably lose, and you better have an airtight system in place if you want to make that believable. Perhaps deliberately create "fake" escape opportunities to teach her that "escape is impossible". Also, you'll probably need to pick up the pace on the indoctrination and Stockholm syndrome stuff. History has long show that threats, violence and force are far from 100% effective at suppressing dissent. Best way to get people to play along with your rules is by convincing them it's good with things like cultural assimilation. There's a reason cults typically start with missionary outreach and not forceful kidnappings. Makes for a less exciting induction, but realistically, it's more effective. The cult idea has potential to be more than just a flimsy excuse for an imprisonment rapefest, so hopefully, you realize that potential.
You should make the other part where she gets pregnant her boobs gets bigger
You should make it where she gets pregnant about him and her boobs get bigger
Please please continue the story!!!!
I want to see her pregnant and her breasts full of milk
Yea rape throughout pregnancy. Forced lactation, breastfeeding, bring it on.
Very satisfying to read