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by wesleyfonda

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
continential sauna

The three stupidest words in Literotica: (To be continued). Does John Grisham end his chapter with (To be continued)? Does he end his tales with (To be continued)?

Your writing should close a chapter without this third rate ending. You may never return.

Third rate endings garner a minus two, and that story wasn't that good to start.

wesleyfondawesleyfondaabout 5 years agoAuthor
John Grisham...

I’ve never been compared to John Grisham before. Thanks Anonymous. X

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
John Grisham....

…. Nor should you ever be,

wesleyfondawesleyfondaabout 5 years agoAuthor
John Grisham...

Oh, perhaps I missed your point, petal. Namaste. X

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
John Grisham

Wesleyfonda. Take no notice of Anon - he's just a troll. I enjoyed your tale - there's no need for instant, full-on sex. Your description of the nervousness and anticipation of nudity is spot-on. As is your imagined scene.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
What happens next

Enjoyed this story and want to know what happens next

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Hopefully my work will speak for itself. UPDATE 21 Mar 2019: I've just submitted a story called A Room with a View. Hopefully it will be published soon and I would welcome your constructive feedback as always.