by Jimmyb89
Lacks the action and focuses more on the story. Sounds like the end, wish there was more action...
Thanks...
Your not totally wrong. This chapter is the end... of the beggining. In many ways, it's more meant to set up future threads for other stories I this world. But we havnt heard the last from this main story, they will be back, with a bang. I just want the chance to tell other stories in this world too.