by bondanon
Thanks - it's encouraging to receive feedback like this. I'm just starting out, and now that I know about it, I think I can learn a lot by reading your work.
Wish it was all girl/girl, but I'll take what I can get. Great well-written 1st person narrative tale!
EXCELLENT
Although I am strictly heterosexual this type of punishment could work on anyone. This work was well prepared and written in a very considered manner. Thank you for publishing this story.