All Comments on 'Corrupting Shannon'

kind of a strange place to end the chaper. It felt rushed and a sudden stop...

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Freu mich drauf

Lots to enjoy here! Great premise and I'm looking forward to reading part 2. My only suggestion (and this is totally a personal preference) is that you slow the pase down a touch. Just a little more world building type stuff. You write very well and I want to enjoy this ride!