All Comments on 'Count Down To Moonlight Ch. 04'

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Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
a day at the spa.........hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Loved how hottie man made it clear to cuz how important protecting HIS lady was. Wish some mortals could/would do the same.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Dry opinion

Excellent.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Revisit

Please explain the chaining together part and the mating part in detail.

romancemultiromancemultiover 13 years ago

really like your story!! I think you've done a great job writing his mating instinct w/o making him seem crazy or railroading her. I can;t wait for more! including the chain backstory!

willieonewillieoneover 13 years ago
Thank you!

This is a wonderful story and hope to see the next chapter posted a.s.a.p I hope you will not make us wait months for the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

please please please can we have another chapter soon! what an addictive story, I adore the love and passion and can't wait for lots more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

This story is amazing close to tears because I can imagine their love soo well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
GREAT STORY

Great story...... can't wait until next chapter to see what going to happen.

bad_girl69bad_girl69almost 14 years ago
Just great

I cant wait for the next chapter. I wonder how he is going to explain himself in the morning though....should be very interesting.

wlo2001wlo2001almost 14 years ago
Love this story

This is a great story, I cant wait for the next one.

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