All Comments on 'Cousins Connect For First Time'

Was a promising story until the very last line.

Enjoyable story, though to short and I do not care for blackmail.

And here I thought the last line climaxed the story . ..

It should have been a 4 - gave it a 3. Lose the last line - good story until then.

A good first story. I like how you put your emotions into the sex scenes. I don’t mind the ending, but it needs a bit more if you are going for a followup. Also I thought it was your room not his. Keep writing enjoyed it.

This was my first story. If I can edit it to disclude the final line I will. I had planned a sequel (and I still might) but save this as a pure story. Either way, Thank you for being gentle with your feedback everyone!