All Comments on 'Cousins Meet Again after 15 Years Ch. 02'

Keep it coming

Great story so far. Hopefully Jean doesn’t become a problem

Good story can’t wait for the next episode

More please. Hot story.

Next chapter please

The only bad thing about this is the 3 story part, i need more, many more so keep them coming, it's amazing so far

You are the first author I’ve reached out to after 15 years Reading here. This story is amazing and loving reading it.

wonderful story, well written, captivating story line. Want more soon

Too hard to follow. Your sentence structure and word usage are all over the place. I gave up after the first page.

A good story so far. A tip for future stories... Whenever I finish a story I give it a couple of days before I proofread it. I try to focus on the little spelling and grammatical details (I always take extra care with "your" and "you're", stuff like that) and not so much on the story, plot or dialog itself. Of course, if you can find an editor, that's almost always the best. A second pair of eyes always seems to catch the things you miss. Keep on writing!

You're doing well so far. you have a talent for phrases that seem to leap out, e.g. "invaded the privacy of her mouth."

Fenris420had a good suggestion. Another handy tip is to read it out loud. This slows you down and helps you to read what is actually written.

Thanks for writing this

I know there will be another part, the question is when?

Nicely done, my friend. Please keep writing!

Thank you for your words of encouragement and I very glad you guys are enjoying the series, You have given me very good advice. For the anonymous user that was moved enough to leave a comment after 15 years. Wow! I’m humbled. Thank you all again.

Great story. On to chapter 3