All Comments on 'Coven's Toy Pt. 02'

Awesome series..... More please ???

please do a third chapter

Love it x

thank you so much - this is wonderful!

I enjoy this story line, but I do have a few things I would mention. Not trying to rush the story along or anything, but once the "awkward" phase is over I am not sure how long you should stay on writing with the "vanilla" training phase. Also since the story is called Coven's Toy, we should get a little witchcraft mixed in the chapters, they are all witches after all. Really nice job though, look forward to future chapters.

There are more chapters to come. It always takes a week for the Literotica managers to post a story, so please be patient. The next Chapter hasn't yet been submitted to them. It will be soon, though.

Enjoy

I'm not big on commenting on stories, but honestly, this one deserves it. The grammer is perfect and the characters seem so realistic, even if they are witches. I honestly don't even usually like magic transformations, but this one is a definite exception. Well done :)

That was one of the sexiest, hottest, horniest chapters I have had the pleasure to read. I was wondering where you would lead us after part 1 but damn, that was more than I could have hoped for. I anxiously drool for your next chapters.

Agent X

The effort that goes into your writing is apparent. To write from a female perspective, I personally find very challenging as well. I'm an old fart and Bewitched was a part of my upbringing, so I agree, some sexy witchcraft would be fun, and other characters to make your task even more difficult. Just a thought, really. I'm sure you have your own story that's yours to tell. Nice job.

I’m surprised Tammy hasn’t asked if she could get pregnant

my greatest wish would be to meet those witches , and be tammy