All Comments on 'Covid Insecure Play Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is an interesting story! I'm enjoying it but would love the chapters to be a little longer. I'm also hoping Cliff gets (or at least begins to get) serious revenge on those who raped him and used his wife in the next installment. Also, can't wait to learn the whole story! Overall though, I'm loving that Cliff is taking charge and not allowing himself to be broken. Can't wait to see what he does next!

ThorlolThorlolalmost 3 years ago

Alright some holes in this part. He wants to get revenge on the guys who raped him and fucked his wife? Why not also on his wife? In the last chapter it was stated that she also raped him with a strap-on? Nothing on this? Then there was this funny line "Then he also thought, Dawn had grown into his ideal woman, a cheating, submissive married slut just like their respective mothers and most of his other sexual conquests." He was married to her for 25 years and had always the desire for her to be a submissive slut. Why didnt he do anything earlier. Also why does he want his wife to cheat on him? On one hand he wants her to be submissive and on the other hand he wants to be cuckolded? The whole things doesnt make much sense

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Not many holes in this plot that the asshole, no pun, hasn’t stuck something in already.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please update soon! It's hard when stories have long breaks in between. Looking forward to what's next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

ONE STAR-stories scattered throughout several categories aren't worth reading.

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I've finally started finishing some new stories (too many plot lines in my head), hopefully I will start completing more soon. Most of my writing is fantasy stories at the moment some are based on my own experiences. You dear reader will have to work out which! Thanks in advan...

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