by xyz775
The story was rushed. It would be better if you described each moment in first person.
I liked the fact fact it was short and to the point. Please continue to write with Lacey blackmailing you and basically pimping you out and becoming your Mustress
Realty liked this story. It would be hot if you made a sequel about the brother talking you into going to their football game and getting you to meet them in the locker room where the entire football team hangs up on you.