All Comments on 'Cuckold Conversation'

Asinine crap --☆

This is the kind of tale murder/suicide are made of...

Not erotic at all, though. Just sad and pathetic.

Need an editor!

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Wife and husband have short discussion that ends in a fast divorce. stupid

A marriage destroyed

Fuck dude. Put this shit in Non-Erotic you halfwit.

This was a train wreck about two people who hate each other, and themselves, so much that they are one step away from killing each other in a murder-suicide.

Most writers are trying to make a point, however misguided. What is the point of this?

Just so unrealistic in my world.

Obviously this turd didn’t flush away.

WTF i see lot of cuck garbage but you just beat them all,

Smelly Vomit!

What kind of man is this husband? Is the wife really a whore or a harpy? Maybe she really needs a cock or someone to take control of her real issues.

That I have read

Cannot wait for next time. Daughter and mother, how hot.

Learn how to write dialog

The cuck fascination is beyond comprehension. Just don’t get it.

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Ha this is troll bait. If two characters hate each other so much why the fuck would these characters be married and stay together. The daughter is 18 she will chose who she wants to be with. Most likely neither of them.

Oh my god what an awful story this is it’s like a teenager has written it. There is no imagination no creativity the punctuation is extremely poor. Please if you are going to write anything like this please please first get an editor. Then try use your creativity but most of all try writing something different because these types of stories are just plain old fashioned boring. You may like writing these types of stories which is fair enough. I’m not telling you to stop writing these stories. I’m trying to ask you to make an effort into writing something that no one has thought about to use that mind to write something what people want to read . You have got loads of different types of category’s at your fingertips putting this into a category that finds these types of stories boring. Will cost you because these types of readers in this category will only slam your story to get at least a bit of hope try different category’s. And have fun tying to figure what you are best at little tip for you loving wife category loves BTB stories ( Burn The Bastard/bitch ) that is why straight away your story never stood a chance sorry.

First and last story. Hopefully. From a woman's point of view this is no more than two miserable people living separate lives in the same house. If she fucked once, she'll do it again. I find it amusing that stories like this make it sound as if it's every woman's dream to be pummeled by a nine-inch cock. When in reality, we seldom ever think about it. Most of us are happy with what hubby has to offer. If a woman marries a man with a pencil dick, that's on her, not him. Own your self made misery, pull up your big girl panties and get on with life. This is so bad it doesn't deserve a score above one star.

ok but feels like wrong category.

It just needed a few more sentences. With video rolling, Jake was warned to not come through the door, the husband feeling threatened. He did anyway and was shot in the head. The wife was kicked out, divorced and Husband and subdued daughter lived happily ever after.

This bitch needs to be dealt with. Kicking her to the curb is too good for her. One star ⭐️ for this shit.

Drop the cunts. Move on with life with out them.

I'm surprised that you want a comment for this piece of shit.

Lol it's funny how all these people take stories like this seriously. Anyway this was pretty hot, looking forward to more 'conversation' stories like this

Idiots don't die out. This author and his story prove it!

Oddness. I think your 2nd amendment rights should be revoked.

Pathetic rubbish.

Needs to be taught some respect

What a bitch nobody would put up with her shit ! Should wait til she’s sleeping tie her up cut her clothes off take her to the hood and drop her naked ass off in some heavily populated area with a sign on her saying size queen then start your divorce proceedings

Story is so, so, but the comments section is fantastic lmao

This one would have to be the most ridiculous story I have read here I'm glad this "Author" has only written one story as I just ate and was nearly sick.

And I don't have a problem putting my name to this

Darren

Not a decent ending. The entire story was too short and you could use some editing help.

By reading some of this sorry tale, judging by I think by the statements of the husband, some rage is stealthily rising to boiling point. Nope, Jake is dead once he enters the home, wife thrown out of the house and daughter goes to university. The husband, exonerated from murder charge because Jake, the supposed real man, struck first.

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I know I changed the story but this is fantasy right? I could change the story or write it but I am not a writer so sue me.

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I hate cuck stories.

So very well done. Gonna piss off the LW Brigade though. Luckily, they are entertaining, but so is this story. Win, win for me. 5*

Terrible writing

I served my time. I truly sorry that my wife Abby was so stupid that she even got our daughter involved with the black neighbor. I wasn't screwing my wife any more because she cheated on me and I was just living with her in the same house for the children. I had plans for moving out as soon as the last of the 3 were gone. On that night I had to work overtime and I didn't get to the house until almost 11 o'clock. On my way I got a call from David our son that got there from college and was going to spend the weekend. He was very upset. I had to work to get him to slow down so I could understand him. We supposedly agreed that Abby was not to bring the trash into the house. To make it worse the SOB brought his son with him. That SOB his son was trying to screw my daughter David said. David was bitching about Tiffany my daughter saying she's as bad as the woman who used to be his mother. I said wait till I get there they could hurt you bad please wait. When I got there we talked about what we were going to do. Plans didn't go as expected but good enough for me. We were outsized by far. I took some hits that's for sure but the big buck was rolled out through the window and landed on the metal roof over our patio. He destroyed it. David after fighting with his son needed a little help and I hit the little SOB once and he took off running. It was that I had hit a minor that made me serve time it was worth it. I didn't think quick enough to have Tiffany tested for drugs when I did it was so little it didn't help in court. I thought BS. Abby got her life together after that. Tiffany went to a local college and remained living there I did my time and then went back to work for the same man and eventually bought the business from him. Things were different to say the least shit we got back together and are still together. It was just unbelievable. She was treating me too well and I told her. It was all most sickening and she backed off.

I liked it. Don't pay attention to the mortality nazis. They take everything to heart, no matter how much your story is in the realm of fantasy. Keep writing!

If you don't get it, it's not for you. And great art always draws a strong reaction. That said, I get the distinct impression this story's not a hit. I've asked the moderator to take it down. * crickets chirping * I'll try something more traditional. Thanks for the feedback. Seriously.

Assuming the editors get the heads up, this story will soon disappear. If you like it, or want to hold it against me in the future, make a copy!

my wife would only get so many words out of her mouth and i would go get my baseball bat and beat her till she could not move then i would set her on fire

Author, in what world would this pathetic piece of shit be considered great art?