All Comments on 'Cuddle Break'

I enjoyed the story.

As far as not being able to write, I did not notice technical problems, I understood what the author was communicating and it flowed coherently. That is good writing. I am sure there is more to the craft of writing a novel. But this was a fun sex story, not literature.

Sikem, I thank you for your positive feedback. I invite you to check out my two other stories on Lit:. "Watching Christina Ch. 1" and "Comforting Jodi Ch. 1". Enjoy!