All Comments on 'Cultivating Lilly Ch. 05'

Still no forward movement in the story - one star only. Booooooring

I agree with Enfield13, I like slow burn stories but this one isn't even burning at times. Good Plot good characters , just speed it up a little.

Pappasleaze!

I think this chapter should have been much longer and without the odd dream sequence. I get wanting to visualize her inner fears but it seemed too distracting.