All Comments on 'Cultivating Lilly Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I got lost on the first page. Women do not urinate from their vaginas. They have a different opening near the vagina for it but not from their vaginas. It's like an uninformed man wrote this.

Source: a woman who knows basic anatomy

Triton4673Triton4673about 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for your comment and I understand your displeasure. I used vagina as a general term. I felt urethra was too clinical and the older female character has used vagina throughout previous chapters.

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Over the course of several years I have written a story about a female character during three distinct times of life: Her sexual awakening in her late teens, her time spent as a sex slave in her 20s, and her life as a married woman. As a young writer, I was drawn to the erotic...

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