by CoCoNiy101
NOOOO . okay first of all , im confused as hell. did her and alejandro get married and then divorce ? and then did he get back with his ex ? im confused ... cause then str8 after that part it just casually continues with th story. i am immensely disappointed with the ending.
but thank you for your hard work and finishing this :)
Kat was dreaming about them at Thanksgiving. I thought they got married and divorced too but I reread it and saw she had a bad dream.
Oh my gosh! Thank you so much, I didn't read it properly lol
I wish there was an epilogue! I really enjoyed this story!!
I'm glad Kat put her crazy away before she boarded the plane to New York. It would have been super expensive to fly back. Call me a sucker, but I would love a wedding epilogue with a cute, tawny haired baby. I would loooooovvvvveee that.
Also, CoCoNiy101, no apology is necessary. I was simply stating an opinion; one I stand by. After submitting it I realized I should have sent it as feedback. I was probably PMSing that day or something. Yeah, I'll blame it on menstruation, not my absurd neuroses...
One thing I did think was weird in this installment was baby Rosalina celebrating a U.S./Canadian holiday with her Argentine family rather than her American mother who lived alone in Argentina. It was all in a dream sequence anyway, right? For all we know, Rosalina was a pink elephant.
The thought of Pat not having ever seen her grandchild was super depressing. I don't want to entertain that possibility. Yeah, I'm pretty sure those were just Kat's wild pregnancy dreams.
Epilogue please. I am so happy Kat got over her fear but I also appreciate a character who actually thinks things through. I have a soft spot for South America so I definitely enjoyed that aspect of the story as well.
I have been checking for months on this update! Bravo! But like the others I say this needs an epilogue! This needs FULL closure...I hope your will do so PLEASE!
70% of the Argentinean people are roman catholic, and they indeed celebrate thanksgiving.
Yeah, Thanksgiving is now observed as a national, secular holiday so I'm not sure what you meant by pointing out the Roman Catholic percentile of Argentinians. About four countries officially observe Thanksgiving; unfortunately, Argentina is not one of them.
Thanksgiving is a holiday commemorating Protestant colonists having a successful harvest and giving thanks to God for it. Some Native Americans were guests at some of these early dinners because they had shared their knowledge of agriculture with the colonists. (History tells us that relations between Native Americans and the colonists and their descendants didn't work out so well...) The holiday continued as a civil tradition from then on. Didn't you make those turkey hands out of construction paper when you were in elementary school? I love those things...and history.
She gave up her whole life after 3 months of dick and baby asswiping duty? She gave up her life to play mommy and sex slave?... K.
Please PLEASE PLLLLLLLLLLEASEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Need a final ending!
Three cheers for a happy ending! This was a cute story and you had just the right pace built up leading to the finale.
Omg I am so in love with this story. I only discovered it in the past few days and have spent quite a bit of time reading and re-reading it. Each time I feel each emotion that Kat feels, who wouldn't with that sexy man beside them.
This is exactly what I love in a man and in a love story. A strong but gentle man, and real story with real life hardships/mistakes/trials/romance. You write so beautifully. Im so happy they end up together. Alejandro reminds me so much of my bf ...so I hope this is a great omen for a proposal for me too, lol.
I like this story coz its low on drama, but the ending is rushed and not convincing. And why do they always have to get "unexpectedly" pregnant? so cliche