All Comments on 'Cupidity'

Well crafted and dove-tailing neatly with my own opinions.

She's about to rape him while they wait, yes?

After I'm done building my temple in her honor, I won't have a name to chisel across the front. We never got one. For that matter, how's a guy supposed to start a cult in a goddess's honor without a name? It makes the prayers super awkward: "Praise be to *cough cough*, the super funny chick." Silliness aside, this is really f'ing funny. Well done, Ruby. You earned my '5' with ease. -PF

I liked your writing as well as your sense of humor. I thought both were excellent and thank you for a good read.

I also thought the humor was good. It was whimsical in terms of the mythology which made it original.

Your story about Cupid is humorous--an updated view of mythology. Too bad you missed Hillary; she needs a whole quiver of arrows. Perhaps you should try again.

eros hoofing it on borrowed heels, and the pencil dick imagery, amongst others...hilarious

only trouble is, did the world's love troubles have to be caused by a misguided (in lust) FEMALE dryad? so that once again, folks can pin the blame on the fairer sex? - not fair!

anyhoo, lovely to read something intelligently written on this site

Nice story. Gave me a good chuckle. Thanks for sharing it. :)

You got me eager for more of your very individual work.

I agree wholeheartedly with your disgust with the big 'V' marketing and I admit, with pride, to being browned right off with the perpetual 'ceremonials' industry.

Any chance of another like this?