All Comments on 'Cutty Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very boring

This chapter was a complete waste of time. If your short chapters are not erotic then combine some that are.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Agreed...

If this is a repost. Try to bundle 3 or 4 chapters into one. Usually dull chapters like this exist to forward the story or fill in blanks regarding the characters background, or even create sub arcs for future events. But this was...devoid of any of that. I’m guessing that if someone reads chapter 6 then goes straight to 8 nothing of value will have been missed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sorry this bothers me

suite = a set of rooms designated for one person's or family's use or for a particular purpose

suit = an ensemble of two or more usually matching outer garments

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