CWB 6 - Bachelorette Party

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A shudder went through her body as I began to suckle her nipple again. One hand was resting on the back of my head, I presumed one also rested on the back of Carrie but didn't pull up to look. Pleasing little shudders and shakes went through her body, sometimes immediately after a nibble by me, other times presumably a similar nibble by Carrie.

I hadn't questioned where Ellen was, presumably she was on her way inside also, and then I felt the bed shift slightly with added weight towards the foot. "Taking care of Josette's fantasy, are we?" Ellen said quietly. I moved my head slightly to be able to see down Josette's body, and found Ellen kneeling between Josette's feet. "Can anyone join this little party?" she asked, and then without any response, began forward, spreading Josette's legs as she took more and more room.

The sudden shudder, when Ellen's tongue found her clit, was different. Her body had shivered and shaken before, but now her hips bucked, she raised her pelvis, pushing her pussy into Ellen's face. We couldn't have said her orgasm was strictly from her nipples being sucked but, that she had a mind-blowing orgasm, there was no doubt. I didn't even think about it that Ellen had never been with a woman before, a first for her also. After Josette had cum, Ellen and Carrie departed to the other bedroom where I'm sure that Carrie returned the favor to Ellen that she'd bestowed on Josette for the first time. When I asked Josette if she still wanted me to pleasure her, we ended up doing each other before falling asleep with the sun now fully up.

~

Tom, our favorite Uber driver, had just finished loading our bags into his trunk when Ellen's phone rang. "What was that about?" I questioned, having heard enough to recognize that it was something about our party.

"Tell you later," she whispered, obviously not talking because of Tom. We had, over the course of calling him again and again, learned that although he didn't show any external signs of listening, he heard virtually everything that occurred in his car.

~

"Our strippers," Ellen leaned over and whispered a couple of hours later after our plane was safely on its way, "that phone call, it was my friend Melissa, she arranged the whole thing." She proceeded to tell me how she'd known Melissa in college, and when Melissa had discovered escorting as a way to make money while still a student, she'd gone into the business, making way more money than her Business Degree would have provided had she gone to work for some Fortune 500 company. She had tried to recruit Ellen, but she'd turned her down as she'd already hooked up with her future husband Dave, although they'd remained friends. When they started talking about my Bachelorette party, Ellen had called Melissa to see if she could help us out with some entertainment. "The two that came," she whispered, "they're actually married and specialize in Bachelor and Bachelorette parties. They only go as a team. The base rate includes an exhibition as they did, and then if anybody wants to have sex, that's $500 extra. Melissa said that they'd reported that the little bit with Josette was technically an extra, but they said not to charge for that as he really enjoyed that. Except for his wife, that's the first time he's ever done that with anyone else."

"Wow!" I whispered, realizing that if it had been an extra $500 for paid sex, the phony police performance must have been a pretty penny. "And they do this all the time?"

"She told me those two are really popular and do three to four parties a week and that almost every Friday and Saturday is booked months in advance. She said they actually get more bachelorette parties than bachelor -- that despite the popular image, the girls are usually more... shall we say, uninhibited?"

"I'll bet. He did have a nice cock, didn't he?"

"Yeah, but she also said that his wife gets a lot more requests for... extras... than he does, but he gets a lot of brides-to-be. Something about the girls last night out maybe? Something they've always wondered about, and a way to do it with no strings attached?" I couldn't help but translate that into our own early morning escapades just a few hours before.

"You going to tell Dave about our trip?"

"He'll want to know all about it. Are you going to tell Ricky?"

"I don't know. Probably, if he asks. If he doesn't ask for specifics, perhaps it's best that what happened in Palm Springs stays in Palm Springs?"

"He is my brother, I'm sure he'll love to hear everything about it."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

After reading the first chapter I went to check the ratings of all the parts, the moment I saw the low ratings(compared to other parts) and the word bachelorette I knew that this was going to be bad, I am not going to bitch about it as much as I didn't waste my time reading the all the chapters before this and then get disappointed later on, I guess this just wasn't for me, would have loved reading it but this chapter just ruined it for me

BenLongBenLongover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment anon, although apparently you've missed my multiple disclaimers in my stories.

Although I have now written several "cuckold" stories, it is not one of my kinks. As for emails and comments, just look at the very first in this comment chain "WOW just wow. I want a party like that please." That I can write about something, say "murder," doesn't mean that I have to understand, want, desire, lust for, or any other adjective that says I desire to murder someone. I'm a male, so can I write from a female perspective? Yes - but that doesn't mean I want to be a cross dresser, transvestite, or in any way want to be a woman. Do women like to do or desire the same things that men do? Yes, absolutely. Do they have naughty/sexy bachelorette parties? Yes. The location that I described, or another one similar, advertised the location on-line as "the ultimate bachelorette party location" or something similar, which is where the idea of the location came from. This is erotic literature. It's fantasy. Different strokes for different folks, and for the previous anon poster - you're correct the comment was unquestionably boorish and unhelpful. If he/she didn't like the story, all he had to do was click away. I don't normally delete comments, good or bad, but sometimes I really should do just that. Unfortunately I'm more of a man of a few thousand words. LOL

I've got no problem with you not liking the story, to each their own and thanks again for reading, and I hope that at least some of my stories you'll enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Different anonymous, because if you respond that strongly to a one-word comment, even an unquestionably boorish and unhelpful one, I don't need you knowing my pseudonym. Life's too short to deal with angry people unnecessarily.

Anyway, my question: you're saying you've gotten emails from female readers saying that a story about infidelity at a bachelorette party (and no, the dick doesn't have to enter the vagina for it to be cheating. Hell, a dick doesn't have to be involved) "struck a chord" with them? Damn. That's a lesson and illustration of the importance of being incredibly careful when selecting the woman you'd like to marry, if ever there was one!

But then, some men enjoy being cuckolded before they're even married, I suppose, and some men just trust too much. Sucks for them, right? /S

I get that swapping and cuckoldry is one of your kinks, based on your other work, but it's not one of mine, and while this may have been mild by your standards, it left me cold.

While I dislike the scenario, at least she didn't blow the stripper... cheating with a woman is an exception in her mind, I guess. I didn't really hate it though, so I can't give it one star, but I also can't give it more than three.

BenLongBenLongalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Well, Gee anonymous, glad you read to the end of this BORING story. Although, from the e-mail feedback I've got from female readers, this apparently struck a chord with many of them and they don't seem to agree.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Boring!

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