All Comments on 'Dad-Off 05'

Wow whoisbrian, you just took twisted to a whole new level, and I loved every word of it! And with the way this went down, I'm wondering who Clark will be fucking first, Kyle, as his reward for being a good boy or Henry, to show him who the Master in this Dom/sub threesome is. Great chapter!

I really like the subtle way Clark is slowly but surely turning Henry into a sub as well. Hope to read more of these artfully written chapters. A collar for a shaved Henry, too, at some point and some mild paddling and possibly piss play would further develop the piggy theme as well.

Please, please finish the story!!!!!!!!!!!!