All Comments on 'Daddy Pt. 03'

For the love of god, learn the mechanics of writing the English language.

It might also help if you developed some semblance of an imagination instead of using tired, boring plots that are overworked and underdeveloped.

Or maybe you could just not post your typing practice.

Cageysea9725 how about you stop being mean to someone that is trying and do it yourself? Take all those negative comments and post something on here.

Dear chicken shit Anonymous, being honest is conflated as meanness only by idiots. I have actually done what you dared me to do, as one could surmise by having 700-ish followers. I took them down. I publish elsewhere, and not for free.

If you really want to convince me I shouldn't make similar comments to what I made here, then show me that they're inaccurate. I'm not a parent or teacher of any of these people. I have no obligation to me nice or coddle any of them. They need to be told the truth so they can either improve, or stop submitting garbage.

Now that's a twist one could wait for, hoping to see what happens in future chapters

Nice twist. A philandering father with a conscience for his long list daughter. Will he introduce her to his family?

I love it. I'd like to read more chapters

The premise was good. The story was good and very erotic (although you could have gone into a bit more detail of the fuck scenes in my opinion), you just need a good spellcheck and/or editor. Definitely worth the read and I hope the trolls don't discourage you too much. 4 stars for all 3 parts.