All Comments on 'Daddy's Dollhouse Ch. 03'

These chapters are too short

Thanks for the feedback Anonymous. I have considered longer chapters rather than the short scenes I am writing now. My goal has been to write a scene that takes around 15 minutes or less to read. Writing and editing takes time and that length seems to be a good one for me to be able to post something about once a week. These chapters came out so quickly because I had them back logged to get the story started. I can make an effort to add detail and more length though if that is what people would like to see.