Very good job not creating a perfect blend. That would have been cheep and lazy.. Your forgiven for chapter ones abrupt cut off, just title your multi part stories with ... Ch1, etc to avoid the problem.
I’ve always felt that erotica tends to take itself too seriously – a stick up its collective bum, as it were. For my part, I find the whole bumping of pelvises thing to be intrinsically comic. Fun in other ways, too - but still. I started out trying to write parodies of the g...