by 59fuzzyb
Was not the best chapter. Grown man who has an open relationship doing unnecessary sneaky. Can tell your wife after but not before? Encouraging daughter to betray her friends trust. You had all the right ingredients but the mix was wrong for me.
"Make me believe you, Michel". Really? Some serious dissonance in this story - an inexperienced 18-year old (other than 3 shitty experiences) talking, acting and performing like a seasoned pro. Dad was supposed to "teach" her, but she might have taught him a thing or two. Would have been so much better if the story would have built up the older man teaching the young woman. So low marks for this chapter because you were too lazy to follow your script.