All Comments on 'Dakota's Surprise Pt. 05'

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DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 3 years ago
Wow! I can hardly catch my breath!

Is this a series or a sine curve? So many high moments immediately followed by devastating heartbreaking events. It's extremely well-written and mesmerizing. My hankie is sopping wet right now.

xoxo,

Di

coyote62coyote62over 3 years ago

I love the series but I have to say that was not the place to end it!!! Poor little Dakota deserves love and joy. Hell I'd give it to her if she was real. I feel so bad for her. The biggest thing is being treated like that by Rose. I'm friends with tons of lesbians and they just hate trans. I don't get it but it's the truth. Rose kinda fits that bill!! Need longer segments with just a touch more happiness!!

Other than that loved the continuation of the series!!!

curricdcurricdover 3 years ago
Keep up the good writing

I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.. This is an exciting story. I love the twists and turns.

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