Dana - A First

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We must have sat talking for about half an hour and my phone rang. I had to leave to take care of some business. I got up and pulled her to me for a hug, and she just melted into my arms. It felt so wonderful I didn't want to leave. I moved to her door and she followed, holding my hand. As I got to the door, I turned and pulled her to me again, kissing the top of her head.

I moved her to the stairway just inside the front door and put her on the first step. Laughing, I said, "I've got you at eye level now and can pull you to a kiss and not have to bend over."

She hugged me and rubbed her breasts against me. "I wish you could stay. I enjoy being with you, Paul"

Needless to say, I was hard as a rock. Standing there looking in her eyes, I was rubbing her back and sides. All she had on was a t-shirt and sleep shorts, and feeling her softness of her skin was irresistible. I slid my hands under her shirt, rubbing her back and sides, and she just laid her head against me, enjoying the feeling.

"You know if I stay any longer, I'm not going to leave." I smiled.

Laughing, she replied, "If you stay any longer I'm not going to let you leave."

"I really don't have time to play, I have to get going," I told her.

She replied with a kiss and lick to my ear, whispering, "It doesn't have to be long, honey."

I slid my hands down to her butt and pulled her tightly to me, letting her feel the full hardness she had created. She pushed against me, hugging me tightly.

Running my hands between us, along her crotch, I could feel the heat she was generating. I pushed her shorts down and ran my fingers between her legs and she was soaking wet. I could feel that her pussy lips were swollen and literally dripping. As I was playing with her, she began to undo my pants, and pulling them down. Taking my dick in her hands she pulled me to her. With her standing on the step of the stair, she was the perfect height to rub the hard head of my dick against her clit and slip it between her legs. Holding each other close and slipping between her legs, it didn't take long for me to get close to coming.

"Dana," I told her. "We're about to make a mess." She arched her back and pushed towards me I began to slip inside her, lowering myself a bit, and I was in but not very comfortable for either of us.

Reaching around her butt and picking her up by her legs, she wrapped them around me, slipping all the way inside her. I duck-walked her back to her couch and lowered her down kneeling with her and still inside her. Hampered by my pants, I couldn't move as much as I wanted.

Smiling, she just whispered in my ear, "God this feels awesome, Paul it's so deep in me. Just come for me baby, just come for me, I want to feel your cum inside me again."

Smiling with her, just a couple of short strokes and I did, not as much as the day before, but oh God it felt so good. I continued to stroke in her and move side to side. I wanted her to come too, I could feel my nuts rubbing against her ass and I pushed hard into her trying to get as deep as I could.

She began to moan and cried out "Oh YEAH!!! Nuugggghnnnnnhhhh, uuuuunnnnnn!!!!" as she broke over the top and her body flexed and squeezed her legs around me.

We were both sweating a bit, and me half-dressed along with her with just her sleep shirt on cum starting to ooze from her pussy and down my nuts. Lying on top of her, my pants around my ankles, her shorts on one ankle, we both laughed like a couple of fools, but it was so nice, such an awesome feeling.

I got up, reached for her hand and looked at her pussy. It was dripping. I reached to catch it for her and she grabbed my hand. "Don't, unless you want to stay longer," she said with a giggle.

I laughed. "We may have to finish later; I really have to get going," I said.

"I know, Paul, I know." She smiled. "It's nice to know that I have that effect on you."

"You have no idea how you have affected me, but it's equally nice to know I have the same effect on you," I told her, kissing her cheek as she cleaned up.

Hugging her closely before I left, I couldn't help seeing the look in her eyes: it was more than lust.

I texted her shortly after I left. "I just want you to know how awesome you make me feel, Dana. Thank you for being you."

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redbaron172redbaron172over 1 year agoAuthor

Reply to Anonymous on 9/29... Thank you for the comments and constructive criticism, this was a first for me to write this and enjoyed trying to get it down. I'm sure if I'd had more training in English and writing/Literature it be easier for me. The washrag thing, well not something I really thought about (cause I'm a guy). Maybe a bit more research into some aspects would help. Either way thanks for he comments, hope you read the 2nd part I have done, which I'll post as soon as I finish with my last proofread.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Decent for a first go. The back story/continuity errors were a bit distracting. Some of it felt it a bit repetitious. It was annoying how quickly and how frequently they called each other Baby upon their first romantic kiss. That sort of thing usually takes more time. As a lady, this stood out for me: "I took a washrag and gently washed her from the top of her butt all the way around her front." I immediately winced and thought, "Good way to get a UTI."

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well written and easy to read. The build up was slow and kept me reading faster by the minute. One of the best. Thanks.

redbaron172redbaron172about 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks to you that have provided comments and also feedback. Sparrow69 thanks for the compliment, I decided to try this and with the help of blackrandi1958 she assisted with me developing dialog. My punctuation may not be the best and to be honest I never was a big fan of english or literature in my education, although I did and still do write fairly well in technical dialog. To those anonymous commenters: I appreciate the input, maybe I need to look at how the story flows and interaction. There was one personal e-mail feedback from an anonymous commenter that I'd like to be able to respond directly to but can't. If you see this I'd be willing to let you 'proofread/help edit' if you are willing. I'd love to find a couple of good editors to assist in putting finishing touches on stories. I'd like to continue this effort.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A great story would have been better if he had put a baby in her and they had lived a good life together with a little girl for her son

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