All Comments on 'Daniel and Sara Pt. 05'

One of the best stories I have ever read. You do a wonderful job of touching your readers emotions! 10 stars!

Thank you so much, anonymous! Wish I knew your username! I always have thought sexuality, whether making love or raw and dirty, benefits greatly from having an emotional context. Pickups, one night stands can be a great deal of fun, but for me, personally, connecting from the heart intensifies the experience. Working on Part 6 now. Keep reading and commenting!

Great writing great !! word choice !! thumbs up...eagerly waiting to see how the love and lust continue when Sara goes to College ...with so much emotion and bonding it cant get any better...Now i want the next chapter as quick as possible..please dont seperate Daniel and Sara..Last but not the least...one request ,, As you amaizingly wrote this love story ...i will hate to see Sara involed in sex with any man exept her father long as her father is alive....plz Give a very quick uldate...

Each one of your chapters is as hot or hotter than the one before, I enjoy your style and I agree with the comments you made to anonymous regarding emotions and context. I also think they have a great five weeks in Europe and with the family in Israel before they start school with ample opportunities to experiment perhaps with the guidance of a bi-Madame perhaps also a little more torture. There's my dirty mind again. Anyway however you play it please don't keep us waiting too long.

Thank you all for such encouraging comments! Part 6 is already submitted and hopefully will be up in 24 hours. I started to write a 2 part story but I am still going as long as you want to read them. Part 7 is started and I think at least 10 chapters is likely. Thanks and please keep voting and commenting!

Still loving the story, but not crazy about impersonating 'Mom'. Can't wait for the trip.

The whole story - every part is fantastic. I just wish you didn’t have so many parts and had combined them into a few long ones.