All Comments on 'Darcy Goes to Paris'

Your heroine’s travelogue is off to a quick, romantically erotic start. She may not want to go, but this reader wants to see what lies ahead. Just a couple of thoughts: Would be nice to learn a bit more about your main character not to mention the companions she meets along the way. That and get that “phone maps” can lead one astray, but what is point of very brief “visit” to sex club for the storyline (maybe portent, otherwise odd)? Has potential and sex well done.

Absolutely love this. I thought the segue to the sex club was a very honest realistic inclusion in the story. It all sounds blissfully believable! Lucky girl!

Thanks

Tess (uk)