All Comments on 'Dark Angel: Nark Ch. 04'

by inyotefi

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
This is the best Dark Angel story ever!

The plot is captivating and so close to the series its like James Cameron himself wrote it. And the sex was so descriptive and vivid. You are the best DA smut writer ever.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

OMG! Dude this story is awsome and smokin hot! I luv it. More please?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

you're spoiling me with these constant awesome updates!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I agree with everyone else the story is getting better with each chapter. There is only one thing that I would like to seen added would have been sex between Max and Joshua. My thinking is that is Joshua having K9 DNA he would not smell that Max was in heat, but would also react like a dog (act on it and go for it) and since Max is in heat, she would welcome it.

inyotefiinyotefialmost 12 years agoAuthor

Hey all, just wanted 2 post a reply to the last dudes comment: Fact is I thought along the lines of a Max/Joshua pairing but Joshua played such a small role it just didnt fit the plot. I will keep it in mind for the future. Thanks appreciate the input.

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