All Comments on 'Dark Desires - The Boss’s Wife'

Nicely done.

Weak ending. Were they found in Japan?? 3*

A six inch wide cock? Do you know "anything" about human anatomy? Dumber than a bag of frogs. The content, grammar and dialogue were equally as bad. No wonder you only have 12 followers.

Just another pathetic skank. /sigh

Welcome new writer. I like your premise and title. The execution can be improved. If you can get someone to proof read and help you with the flow and editing. This is a link of resources for you. Keep writing.

https://www.literotica.com/editors/

Yes, I did mistake width for girth when writing this story. It is suppose to be girth, not width

quote He took her nipple in between her teeth. unquote

Shouldn't this be in the Loving Wives section?

great story 5 stars

Nice, short, und concise!

11/10 Mochis!!!!!

I enjoyed the entire story right up to the ending.

It leaves you hanging. What is Harvey going to do now?

Appreciate your writing.

Well written and was a pretty good story but I still hate cheaters and cheating no matter what!

April made the foolish decision to give up a good husband and a solid life for an uncertain future with a man-boy. Good luck with that. Like all cheaters, she'll regret thinking with her kitty instead of her brain.

Is being indifferent considered a good trait???????

Ending sucks, harvey goin to stick it to them now???????

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

The ending could have been better written. It says the divorce was concluded, why would he go looking for her? Doesn’t make sense. If the point was to make Harvey realize his loss, I would’ve gone with a forlorn latter bemoaning his belated realization

I agree with many of the other comments. The story was great, but the end seemed weak. I understood April's motivations, and I understood how Donny was attracted to her - from a general crush to coming to love her. I got into the idea that April deserved the "love of a good man." Harvey was certainly not that man.

But that's where the story needed to explain (a) why did Harvey go looking for her, and (b) why was he so clueless as to believe that his neglect didn't affect her? The ending could certainly have been juiced up.

And as a side question, what happens to Donny's career now?

My only criticism is that it could have and should have been a much longer, more detailed story.