All Comments on 'Dark Fantasies Pt. 01: The Auction'

I thought it was a good start for a first timer, My only negative is the chapter was rather short.

Sb

"I smile as I'm led off stage..." As in Zeppelin, dig.

Reply to sb;

thank you for your support and I agree it was short but I'm having some personal problems that I'm working through so writing is difficult for me. please do not critize the length and I apologize for it. I'll add a second part soon.

This is good slave. 😏

When is the next story?