All Comments on 'Dark Matter: Episode 1'

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AwkwardMDAwkwardMD7 months agoAuthor

The story and images have been corrected (thank you, Laurel), and now this is as intended. There are two more episodes, and they should appear sequentially over the next two days.

AwkwardMDAwkwardMD7 months agoAuthor

Also, I know this story can be kind of jarring, but it is only part 1 of 3. The following episodes will be out over the next two days, and I hope that readers will give me the benefit of the doubt to stick with it and see where it goes. It's heavy, yes, but I'm so proud of it.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy7 months ago

Taking the dark side of the power, like darth veder ā€¦.. Greed, Power, Betrayal, Sex Ė‹ just the thinks happen in Real Life and corrupting us AND WARā€˜ ā€¦.. war that was the part of this chapter i will just use this šŸ¤¢šŸ¤® ā€¦. RL is presenting us daily with and so this was not expected, ok my problem ā€¦.. the plot at all, as old as the universe and well outlined and great written ā€¦.. betrayal, thats truly a horror movie in everyoneā€™s lifetime and mostly performed from the never expected ones ā€¦.. sheefa definitely needs a lot to learn about this and hopefully she is not becoming a darth veder

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Just pressed submit on my latest collaboration with Omenainen! It'll be up on our shared account (link below) hopefully in the next few days. I'm really excited about this one. It's short and sweet (and sweaty) and it came together in a flash. Can't wait to get it out to y...