by Iread2relax
I enjoyed this chapter. Any change you could release the chapters closer together? its hard to remember what the last chapter was about when you space the chapters so far a part. Minor note; there were a few spelling errors.
if i was jamal i would be pissed they took upon themselves to call daddy to fix things in what is not there territory.yes it involved their mates IF the girls accepted.they should have let jamal take care of thing while they got to know their intended mates then asked if the grandmother if she wanted to move or not.since leejohn hasnt got a were mate(yet) he may not want to live with the other pack,or if he does mate with a were she might be from jamals pack so now the family will be split up anyway.
I think things will get better for them. I am truly enjoying this story. The fact that the wolves are not perfect makes it even better. Like Anonymous asked, please post chapters a little closer. I want to read more.
About time Jebutu got his head out of his behind. He had good intentions concerning Lavinia but some of what he was doing wasn't really helping her. She can't flourish and be herself with him keeping her at home and not letting her make some of her own decisions. She has turned herself around and can be trusted.
I thought the kids were going to put up more of a fight about having them move away with their grandma. They need to keep considering what is best for her and not their pride of being able to take care of her or not. Its understandable how they feel.