All Comments on 'Darkest Temptations Ch. 03'

Good start. I look toward to reading the rest, though you might want to try making the chapters a little longer, if you can.

Also, didn't Dimitri mention an auburn haired woman at the start of ch 1? I don't think it was Alera, was it? They hadn't met yet.

Oh well, can't wait for the next chapter.

You continue to tell an interesting story. Dimitri thinks Alera is his mate so who is the woman who walked into his suite of rooms? And she never said exactly who killed the 5 only that she assumed that it was "Ancient". And now Alera is headed for Washington DC for her job w/the CIA.. Will Dimitri be following her over soon? I look forward to the next chapter to see where you go from here!

Great writing, love the story - but still way too short. These first 3 chapters would have made a great single chapter. But you are posting frequently and that makes it worth following the story. Looking forward to reading more of your writing!