by MidwestConnection
Bit of a let down with the mother daughter interaction. It just happened with no build up to the incestuous nature of it.
Love this story. Plot. Great characters. Sex. Intrigue. Suspense. It's got it all, and it's well written. Hurray. 5*
I keep seeing the same inconsistencies in the characters. Brian is now shy and soon afterward very forwarding. I think the author should decide how he wishes his character to be, or shy or forwarding. He should be careful with the details: a character can't die in a car wreck in a chapter and of cancer in the next.
Interesting that mother and daughter are sharing the mother's boyfriend. I look forward to seeing how the relationships progress. Be careful that you don't write yourself into a corner.
Will just see where this goes. The porn industry is the destroyer of thousands upon thousands of young naive girl’s lives. Let us not kid ourselves, who would glorify an industry that wroughts so much destruction on young females. Don’t forget what it did to Anastasia Knight.
3/5
Great story so far... Curious to see if he turns out to be a cuck. Disappointed in him being a cheater with Denise and turning Mark into an unwilling CUCK!!!
I am really loving this story. It has a plot, along with great sex. I am looking forward to the rest .
This would have been a 5 except for how they treated Mark. Brian considered him a friend and previously expressed concern that Mark be aware and buy into the foursome. It was obvious that he was not. During the night, all Denise did was disparage him. They all disrespected him. It was disgusting and I would expect he would seek divorce. I hope that he gets a hold of the video and photos and takes Denise to the cleaners. In terms of the story, I will be disappointed if Denise comes to LA and gets involved with them. It's really too bad, the rest of it with consenting adults is fine. But ruining a marriage like they did is awful, especially to a friend!
Yeah, they never should have messed with Mark and Denise's marriage, even if Denise was all for it. Christie seems to have no sexual boundaries. She really is sexually selfish, not caring who it hurts as long as she gets what she wants. She seems to love just sex in general and not necessarily just with Brian. She takes it where she can get it. I really believe Brian would be better off with Emily, rather than her mom.