All Comments on 'Daughter Holds the Keys Ch. 04'

Write Longer Chapters

I am enjoying this story a lot, and I am looking forward to the future chapters. Thank you very much for writing it and sharing it with us.

As for the other comment that demands longer chapters... I don't mind short chapters. I certainly don't think your chapters are too short. And anyway, please don't let random internet strangers tell you how to write. Every writer here is unique, and I would hate to them all blend into one uniform mess just to conform to what the audience demands of them.

Just keep writing however you see fit. You are doing great so far :)

Damn that was hot keep up the amazing writing

Hot as Hell!

This whole series sounds like a real fantasy...i didn't even get horny!!!

And I freakin LOVE it! Another 5 here!

Very Good

Awesome story. Please continue

this isnt that exciting of a story

Amazing!

Please never stop!

Can't wait for the next chapter

Keep the good work going. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

Love it, cant wait for more

I would love to see a series about the father's sister who got the keys for the daughter. A peak into that house would interesting.

Oh wow that was hot.

Well, it was really, really hot story. Too bad he got to cum. It would have been worth the ruined orgasm if they were able to stop his orgasm. For the story the dad has to be a real wimp and submissive to act in such a way. There would be other guys that do not have to cum so much. What we don't know is what happens if a caged guy is caught masturbating or cumming more that once. Since he is out for the night, how many more times does he cum? Brooke is a real sadist and there has to be some laws that prevent such women from tormenting males just for the hell of it. I think Claire may be ok and I do hope that she does not torment her father too much. Oh, and what happened to her mom?