All Comments on 'Daughter Holds the Keys Ch. 05'

very hot stuff :)

I'm sorry, I never thought I'd say this to an author, but this whole storyline is so poorly conceived, that it too bad for words.

Damn it just gets better and better. 5 stars wish i could give it more

Each chapter has been well paced, and the rate of escalation between chapters is likewise great. I’m looking forward to the rest!

Is this in the right category?

Time to kick that slut of a Brooke out of your house and keep the bitch out 8x

Very nice. I like the begging Brook made him and Claire do. They need to keep teasing him, but not be mean about it. Keep them coming.

I think Brooke is getting too much power in this. She isn't the one responsible for those keys but she is trying to take too much of a lead. Otherwise this was interesting

I really like the premise of a lesbian couple holding the key for a guy... It being his daughter and girlfriend just adds.

Good pacing, nothing too crazy :)

Very well done. Bravo.

That is one dysfunctional family

Can't eben read anymore. Tried to keep up with this story but I can ABSOLUTELY not take another word. Good luck.

Wow!

I love this setting and dynamic!

The shy young woman who finds herself controlling other men sexual lives, the more dominant/sinister women, and of course the reluctant/humiliated guy (especially father/brother) who keeps fighting the sinful thoughts.

I need more of this. A lot more! I don't remember the last time a story had this effect on me.

Thank you for this. And please keep writing more of this theme.

loving the story and looking forward to reading next chapters

Well written and engaging. Eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

I’m in serious need for the next chapter of this story.

I'm checking everyday for the next chapter... I noticed a deviation in your publish intervals, and I just hope that doesn't mean we're at an end!

Hi everyone I'm happy to know that people are looking forward to the rest of this story, and I certainly do plan to get back to it sometime. I was able to get through the first 5 chapters very quick, but now life is busy again so I might not be able to post chapter 6 for a while. Thank you for your patience!

Love it! Please keep going.

I check every day this is my guilty pleasure

Good writing

I keep checking back for a new chapter, please continue

I loved your story I hope you write some more, I would go insane in chastity I want to eat pussy right now baaaaad. Damn good story though

Please write more!

I still come back daily to check for new chapters. It's one of the best stories on this site and I can't wait to see how it goes on if it does.

Hope you're good!

As much as I dislike humiliation stories, that was hot.

I keep waiting for more. Please continue

Wonderful stories and good plot development. I would like more details of the world outside and a agree with others that its the shared plight of he males and the dominance of the Females that is good individually and collectively.

I check daily for the next installment!

Such brilliant writing and world building. So very hooked

Looking forward to the next episode

Good Goddess this series is hot.

Over all -great story- !!

I like the parts where he is only "tempted" while his daugther is arround and "dominated" by the daugther´s GF when they are just the 2 of them, REALLY makes a nice contrast.

I was wondering/confused in the next chapter, why Madi wasn´t checking the lock...

...but they just talked about her...

...is there a page missing?

Please continiue ;-)

Hotest Series ive read so far and ive read alot of erotic stories hope you continue.

Well, I wonder why Brooke is allowed to unlock him and why the other two girls are not around to watch? I thought that only family women were allowed to unlock a guy. He sure is a wimp for giving in but I guess if there were naked girls running around without supervision I would be having a lot of problems as well. I like a well written and thought provoking story and this fills that to a "T".