All Comments on 'Daughter's Revenge'

Would appreciate any feedback on my first "published" effort. Particularly if you read the whole (there is more to come) story.

please update soon

Good start. I hope the mother daughter team are given matching tats maybe even some piercings and both used by both men and women. Angie needs very harsh treatment. Good luck.

Good start and a lot of directions you could take it.

Why are both men named George very confusing

Could have made a mistake, but only one George and that is Angie's friend who helped set up "Nancy."