All Comments on 'David and Becky - Casavana Prison Ch. 04'

How many parts are there to Casavana OllyT? Love it so far

When he gets back home from this prison it is time to pack his bags and divorce the whole he married find a new woman that will dominate him but treat him better than the slut he is with now

16 chapters in this one

I dunno, somehow it just feels depressing at this point.

I don't see the point of all this torture and humiliation when his life is just fucked completely and his wife is just a selfish bitch ruining his life for the next high she can get at his expense.

I was hoping this would be one of those stories where the ML finally broke off from the toxic wife and entered into a more loving domme-sub relationship. Really was hoping for Cassie to make a comeback.

Maybe I'm just not cut out for this loveless torture kink.

I can still hope...

Only a few swats with a strap? Come on! Beat him into a pulp. Tattoo Becky on his penis. Hang him on the wall. Give that candyass what he deserves for being such a pussy. Make him cry all day for the next three months. He basically asked for this. No sympathy for the loser.

Don't tell me you're gonna rant about this for next 8 chapters!!!😅

16 chapters of this ... ugh. Overall, this story is a masterpiece. However, maybe I'll tune back in once Casavana is done. Nothing erotic (for me) here. Reading about how boring David's cell is? LOL! Discover the magic of the summary sentence. You are a wonderful writer, but there does not appear to be anything interesting on the horizon. Get him out of prison (after a week or a year, I don't care), just do it in one or two chapters. Above all, bring Becky back!

I am pretty much in accordance with the rest of the people here. I actually want him to grow a backbone. Submissives can still have backbones. He could still grow one. And doing that I think means actually divorcing from Becky once he's out.

I don't know what you have planned, but I honestly wish the punishments were bad enough that it started morphing into torture. Not to be cruel for cruelty's sake, but to harden him. He needs it badly. Even now he just has no self control. He needs to learn that.

Love it so far. Im really eager to what is coming next. And i really hope they make him somehow jealouse about what he is missing at home. In this chapter he got so envy by his thought alone, i think if he only gets a small information from Becky he will suffer so much :). Great story .

But David's daughter? money for living ... bills taxes?

Fourteen more chapters please.

I agree with others that this has been a bit of a boring set of chapters, but I feel like things are about to pick up with the Madam. And since Becky claimed that she and her are a lot alike, I expect some mind-fuckery and unfair games over the next dozen chapters. At least I hope thats what happens. Not sure how many chapters of 'David was bored today' I can tolerate.

As for those wishing for divorce? I personally hate such stories. I don't read erotica to see the main character experience personal growth and fulfillment. Thats what non-jackoff material is for. I'd rather see her divorce him than the other way around. I want to see him get mistreated & screwed over. Thats the fun part. If he ever 'wins' it's a letdown.

Well, "I could not trust Becky any longer." was a line I have been waiting for. What happened at last night's dinner? Did he get dinner? Did he get any water yesterday? I am surprised that he had to go to use the toilet. So far he has only received 1 liter of water this morning, he is supposed to get at least 2 liters a day. I guess they are putting him in a starvation mode now or at least a dehydration one. He forgot, already, about the midnight light shutoff. He would have remembered that from his first night. He was only beaten 9 times today. Being locked up without anything to do would drive someone insane and I guess it could happen. David, please keep your anger to focus on surviving. I am not sure about reading through 16 chapters of him being in this prison. It is well written but would like a couple of chapters at a time be combined for keeping our readers interested.

I enjoyed this chapter...the corporal punishment scenes were especially nice. He has certainly realized the seriousness of his situation and that he is undergoing a very real punishment...as he was bluntly reminded when he asked for a book...Thank you for a good story!