All Comments on 'Debauchery Falls Ch. 09'

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davet1davet1over 2 years ago

Another stellar chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Exciting chapter! I knew this is where the Tanner family would end up eventually, and interesting to see Emily introduced. And that the powers of hypnosis failed as well!

Galloway was off screen for much of it, but I have a feeling she'll get her side of the story done soon. Perhaps with that hulking brute.

Graver is there to rescue them, and Halley seems to have an idea to draw Abernathy out. So it looks like as dire as things are, there are strong signs of hope.

DominantwhisperDominantwhisperover 2 years ago

Excellent work! Best chapter so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A lot of protagonists in the same place, all of them with their own minds. I feel the arrival of a turning point. Another great chapter in an outstanding story.

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