All Comments on 'Debauchery of Indian Wife Menaka Ch. 06'

by SonaliJain

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Here's a hint

In ten days you're posted six stories. Slow down. Do a better job proof reading your stories. Read some stories from the "Loving Wives Hall of Fame" and try to get a better handle on how good stories are put together. Think up some better story lines. Because the two chapters you posted today were simply awful.

1 star

pinkykumarpinkykumarover 3 years ago

Super story. I wish I had his cock in my mouth and another one in my butt. Keep writing Sonali

ronylolronylolover 3 years ago

Super story and im in love with your writing.

waiting for next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
awesome

please make Menaka wear lowest possible saree again like she did in the wedding and skimpiest blouse and make her wear a waist chain or get her a navel ring and anklets....your writing is superb...and i have given you 5 stars

The wedding attire and other details by you are spellbinding

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