All Comments on 'Debitum Infernalis Ch. 01'

Ridiculous. Why do your paragraphs only have one period? Commas are not periods. Commas do not take the place of periods. Commas do not indicate the end of a sentence. Do you know what a sentence is? Nobody wants to read a story made up solely of run-on sentences. Please acquaint yourself with the very basics of punctuation.

Please acquaint yourself with politeness and constructive criticism

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