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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Never again

This story sucks!!!! Dont ever try to write again if this is your result. Maybe submit it for a nightmare column or horror page.

arranmore13arranmore13about 3 years ago

the bitch needs to be shot.

franavatarfranavatarabout 3 years agoAuthor

arranmore13,

I think you missed the entire point of the tale.

"Anonymous",

Thank you for the insightful feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This was simply depressing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I personally loved it, I mean I could sorta guess where it was going but all the same what a good take on things, true selflessness is hard to understand and it has merit. Good job author that was a good read. :3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Sorry to be yet another anonymous commenter, but these others are just stupid. They clearly didn't understand the point of this story. I started off very horny on page one, but now I'm just thinking about things.

Wonderful story.

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