All Comments on 'Deck - Nickleback'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
This was very hot!

I loved the build up in this story and the sex was hot. Thanks for writing it- and please- write more soon!

E.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
hot

Love the story, for no other reason that it hit home. I could have been the girl in that story. Least I know, that I am not alone.

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Sexy Tale

He knew what she wanted, even if she didn't. That is so hot! You might think about getting an editor to help catch those minor mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it!

Please, please keep going - love this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Liked it would make some changes

LOVED the sex and the name calling but it paints a bad picture of the dom/sub relationship for him to throw her out in the end with no regard imo keep writing though!

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