All Comments on 'Declan Ch. 01'

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cmj711cmj7113 months ago

A good boy always eats his goo.

Well done!

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel893 months ago

Not a bad start! Fun to see this premise become an expanded universe. Though this could do with some more description. Having characters just described by hair color is pretty awkward and doesn't do much to set a sexy mood.

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