All Comments on 'Deep Relaxation'

A lovely vignette. The sex scene was hot, even for a sauna, but the buildup was even better. I enjoyed the vivid description of the spa and the lack of detailed description of the couple: it makes it easier for the reader to identify with them.

The two best details: "I have a thing for piercing blue eyes" and "I'm what you guys call a 'spitter'"

I love the narrator's voice in this, she's got a perfect mix of attitude and sexy innocence, at least compared to the situation she was in here; her surprise at what she was getting up to was great.

Thank you so much SomaSlave, for taking the time to read and comment. x